Hi, Chris.
 
My top four finds are:
 
1) There's a potentially powerful statistic in Section  II - 37 that I believe should be included in the Executive summary, namely that over 80% of new housing construction is subject to private deed restrictions.
 
2) The statistic noted above is preceded  by the statement in Section II - 36 that, "as of 1998, one out of eight Americans lived in private common-interest communities".  That suggests that seven out of eight don't but ignores the great number - perhaps a majority - that live in apartments or other rental units.  This statement in isolation may do more harm than good.
 
3) Some cities require (see D #037) or encourage private deed restrictions as an alternative to detailed municipal zoning regulations, effectively bypassing the intent of PRB-1.  This fact could bolster our discussion of the pervasiveness of private deed restrictions and/or of the scope of PRB-1. 
 
4) One important reason Hams are constrained in their housing choices is proximity to adequate medical care (a hot topic in federal circles), but I don't find that mentioned anywhere in our discussion of housing alternatives / choices.  This could be incorporated into document page 25 (pdf page 28) among other places.
 
The rest consists of minor grammatical nits that are of no real consequence.
 
73,
 
Marty N6VI
 
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Marty, sad to say it really is too late. I am way out of position now for miscellaneous edits. Are these major concerns?
73, Chris W3KD

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Marty Woll <n6vi@socal.rr.com> wrote:

>Chris and all involved:
>
>Thank you for your efforts in producing  such a comprehensive and detail-filled response to the FCC inquiry.  If you are open to edits at this late stage, let me know and I'll forward them separately.  If not, I understand.
>
>73,
>
>Marty N6VI
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